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LiquidMidnight
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0 posted 2005-12-10 04:45 PM


Pygmalion's Muse
(Still View of Jessica)

You awoke a dawn
So finely drawn
Amongst the December Wreckage
That muses weep upon

I wrote this for an older women in my life. I wanted to write something longer, but it felt complete like this. I framed it and the presentation is spectacular. I'll be giving it to her in less than two hours (along with a traditional Christmas gif). I hope that she likes it.
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-12-10 04:56 PM

Lovely, yes...I am sure she will enjoy it.
Hugs~Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...  

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-12-10 05:30 PM

How could she not?
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2005-12-10 05:35 PM

I am certain, it will be cherished.
Nicely penned.
majnu
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4 posted 2005-12-10 06:29 PM

read it, liked it.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.
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