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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2005-12-09 06:11 PM



It was when the wind
blew through the puddles
and tides rose
from yesterdays news,
something untouchable
the merging of worlds
i could barely acknowledge,
yet its internal harkening
was embraced through,
when the wind
blew through the puddles,
what was unspeakable,
was for that moment,clear,
beyond the window view.

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1 posted 2005-12-09 06:27 PM


LOVE this....
Enchantress
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2 posted 2005-12-09 06:28 PM


Wonderful!!!

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SmartChick
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3 posted 2005-12-09 07:32 PM


Well written.
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4 posted 2005-12-09 07:46 PM


InkyOne~
I've been jumping word-puddles all day long~

I like what you've done here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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OwlSA
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5 posted 2005-12-10 12:35 PM


You are a painter of words. This is very beautiful.  I have also had that sort of experience, but usually not one of enlightenment, but an unidentified (usually) memory.

- Owl

gemjop
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6 posted 2005-12-10 05:21 AM


the merging of worlds
i could barely acknowledge,
yet its internal harkening


You're into my library again. 'i could barely acknowledge'... I wish i could explain what this made me think of, but i feel pretty tongue tied. Which is annoying.

and 'internal harkening'

Your words give me shivers. x

littlewing
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7 posted 2005-12-11 01:38 AM


I love this Michele . . . like a second of complete and utter comprehension.
Dark Angel
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8 posted 2005-12-11 02:19 AM


LERRVE this Michelle

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how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

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9 posted 2005-12-12 11:55 AM


Michele, you still  have that wonderful way with words, Lady!!
Don't ever let it get lost!!
Hugs,
Ethel

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10 posted 2005-12-12 08:53 PM


This is a winner!
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