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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-12-09 06:11 PM

It was when the wind
blew through the puddles
and tides rose
from yesterdays news,
something untouchable
the merging of worlds
i could barely acknowledge,
yet its internal harkening
was embraced through,
when the wind
blew through the puddles,
what was unspeakable,
was for that moment,clear,
beyond the window view.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-12-09 06:27 PM

LOVE this....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-12-09 06:28 PM

Wonderful!!!

~Let peace begin with me...

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2005-12-09 07:32 PM

Well written.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-12-09 07:46 PM

InkyOne~
I've been jumping word-puddles all day long~

I like what you've done here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2005-12-10 12:35 PM

You are a painter of words. This is very beautiful. I have also had that sort of experience, but usually not one of enlightenment, but an unidentified (usually) memory.

- Owl

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2005-12-10 05:21 AM

the merging of worlds
i could barely acknowledge,
yet its internal harkening

You're into my library again. 'i could barely acknowledge'... I wish i could explain what this made me think of, but i feel pretty tongue tied. Which is annoying.

and 'internal harkening'

Your words give me shivers. x

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2005-12-11 01:38 AM

I love this Michele . . . like a second of complete and utter comprehension.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2005-12-11 02:19 AM

LERRVE this Michelle

Library

m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2005-12-12 11:55 AM

Michele, you still have that wonderful way with words, Lady!!
Don't ever let it get lost!!
Hugs,
Ethel

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

10 posted 2005-12-12 08:53 PM

This is a winner!

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