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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-12-20 07:36 AM



Overflowing In Pleasure

I watch the stream flowing
This place I still recall
We met here so often
Sitting beside the waterfall

I knew there was a reason
It all became so clear
As I view the waterfall
Your voice seems so clear

I began to have that feeling
Then anticipation grew
Almost at the waterfall
I notice you come into view

I could feel my heart racing
As I reach the waterfall
At last the wait was over
The embrace had said it all

I realised you felt the same
As we laid side by side
Overflowing in pleasure
Joyful were the tears I cried


Hope ©2005

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1 posted 2005-12-20 08:55 AM


Hope~
It is just wonderful to see the beauty in your thoughts today~

Loving waterfalls myself ... I found this to be lovely~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-12-20 09:05 AM


this was softly articulated with much love from the heart, mind and soul...pleasure to read...
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just out of reach
3 posted 2005-12-20 09:18 AM


Beautiful thoughts today Hope.
loved this, hugs, Chris

HopeS
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4 posted 2005-12-20 09:26 AM


Thank you for your kind comments in reply  , yes I was writing this and thinking "If only it could happen that way   " but  no matter what , I remain a romantic at heart


Hope

Dadygoose
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5 posted 2010-05-07 05:01 PM


Thank you for taking me into your waterfall pleasure fantasy.  And now I have to the gray box world of clocks and papers....
Jaime

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