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DanniArtist
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since 2005-12-08
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0 posted 2005-12-08 02:59 PM


Moony Space
    
Kidnapped by pale skies
Stars double crossed him, he orbits their unbelievable lies
Folklore movies praised him over the years
People cried, wanted to meet his peers

Million times they said they want to touch
Million rhymes were written on his swell light hunch
A debate is taking place
Somewhere in the middle black holed space
Whether yes or no, imagination or fact
How he always stays intact ?

Taking us to worlds we have never seen
Mars wants to come between
Venus loves his odorous presence
Uranus wants to take shape lessons

Astrologists rode a Capricorn
Wheels of fortune demanded a special treatment
They long for his glimmer, the outrageous scent
They stretched out their starry arms
They begged somebody would take them to his fellow stars

So quiet, space embraces his cute little toy
The only one who brings him absolute joy
Decorating vacuums, gluing haloes
Floating on black seas, stars are his sailors  
      
Like a childish silver spoon
He will continue to glow, our baby grayish moon  

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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
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1 posted 2005-12-08 03:07 PM


Welcome! And please check your email for a special greeting!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-12-08 06:13 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I very much enjoyed your opening post!
Hoping to read more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

DanniArtist
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since 2005-12-08
Posts 16

3 posted 2005-12-08 06:31 PM


Thank you Nancy . Thank you for your lovely welcome message !
Truly yours,
Danni@rtist

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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4 posted 2005-12-08 07:03 PM


Welcome to PIP!  Enjoyed your write.
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