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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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Breath 7 November 2005 After three days of soft-earth rainsong, look, the sunlight is wrapping live, tubular light around patterned branches and straight-backed palisades - and see the leaves lighting up in multi-dimensional delight and blue infinity is lifting my spangled, dragonfly wings - Owl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Owl "and see the leaves lighting up in multi-dimensional delight and blue infinity is lifting my spangled, dragonfly wings" Yes, I see!!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh Good Lord, this reads like I am IN that rainfall - taking flight on the wings of that dragonfly. Beautiful writing, my friend. Left me with much peace, thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
E X Q U I S I T E !! ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
'the sunlight is wrapping live, tubular light around patterned branches and straight-backed palisades" Oh sweet! Love the vocabulary used... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
So, glad you do, Martie (smiles)! It is my pleasure, littlewing - especially after that beyooooooooootiful horse poem you sent me in your response in my poem Solitude - hope my reply appears there - Lilian (my laptop) started hibernating in the middle of it, but I think I got it in after that - also hope it didn't go in twice. Thank you Enchantress - I love your Christmas wreath too! Thank you very much Susan Caldwell. - Owl |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Owl, Yup, I love nature that much too. Nicely done.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh, I will have to go check that out. Goodness, I would love to write with you sometime, if I could even step up to that honor. Your writing is like . . . I don't know . . . like sitting in the woods beneath a pine tree listening to the birds . . . |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Larry C. It's good to know that one shares such a love of Nature with another. Thanks for telling me. Littlewing, that would be fun. I wrote with an ex-boyfriend some time ago (well, he wasn't an ex at the time!). It would be an absolute honour for me. I love your poetry very much. I feel so very honoured that you describe my poetry like that. - Owl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Diana~ What a beautiful breath of fresh poetic creativity you are~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, Marge. Your comments (and those of others), I am sure, are an important part of the encouragement, inspiration and reason for the poetic flow that can be found in this poetry forum. - Owl |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
OH.... This one likes me! . |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks Honeybunch. Thanks Sunshine! There are quite a few other poems of mine that like you too! And so they should! - Owl |
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