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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2005-12-06 01:13 AM


However wise
We think we are
We still should follow
That single star

Slowly making a way of being
Across our winter sky

Hoping when it and we
Come to an end
The world
Will be forever changed

Or at least
A little better than it is
For others not far behind
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2005-12-06 02:55 AM

Nice...everytime I start thinking I'm wise, I soon realize what a fool I am...at times....James
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
2 posted 2005-12-06 09:11 AM

in hopes to leave the world a little better then when we found it...

Joy to the World dear poet.
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-04-20 10:26 PM

good. soft voice but strong words.
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