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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2005-07-16 04:39 PM

Faith on pause
I fumble
more often
than walk
these four walls
devouring my sanity
I forget how to breathe
when I
find myself
craving
answers
like chocolate
sweet on my tongue
smooth to the touch of my lips
just like

your kiss...

spiderwebs
cluttering
my perspective

I trace
the stars
with eyes shut

I thirst...
ache...
to touch
the answers
suspended
from orion's belt...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2005-07-16 04:56 PM

Hey K, it's been awhile.

Your first line had me nodding, and the rest so aptly portrayed the growing pains of the human spirit I had to stop and wince.

This is a lovely thing, lady, and it's lovelier to read you again.

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

2 posted 2005-07-16 05:05 PM

Karen thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed my spur of the moment rant and rave. I'm glad it made sense to someone

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2005-07-17 12:32 PM

Enjoyed....James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-07-17 07:58 AM

wow...this is a cool write

well done

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2005-07-19 12:58 PM

Ceinwyn, this is so well said!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2005-07-19 02:08 PM

"I fumble
more often
than walk'

dang, isn't that the truth..

talent is just spilling forth today.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2005-07-19 04:37 PM

This? Is a rant?
Strange...

I would have called it love.

And very precious in its light.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2005-07-19 06:20 PM

"I thirst...
ache...
to touch
the answers
suspended
from orion's belt..."

I loved that ending! ~ and everything that came before it!!!

~ Kristen, you have penned a very sweet and starry love poem.

It was wonderful to read you again!

Love & Star Light,
Linda

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2005-07-20 01:46 AM

from Orion's belt . . .
I love that . . .

miss you Kris . . .

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2005-07-20 05:07 PM

I forget how to breathe
when I
find myself
craving
answers
like chocolate
sweet on my tongue
smooth to the touch of my lips
just like

your kiss...

I love this part and know how it feels!!
Hugs,

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