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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2005-12-05 10:17 PM

Sleep rose from the morning
a bird upon water
as you told me

and I
have been alone with you ever since

a blissful sink
as teeth will

laying in the wake of you.

You have worn over my skin, opal
and traced me with your black waves
of lucid dreams

So I don’t want this to be a heavy wade
a smother of my leg
as the cotton sticks
underwater

I have lips that wait for your pull

and I want you on their verge
in laughter
the way you always have been

in simple love
that is as old
as it is
new.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2005-12-05 11:32 PM

hugs. i can't describe how blissed i am to see this, to see you happy. he's an incredibly lucky, lucky man, and if he ever steps out of line, i'll have to kill the beagle. hugs

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2005-12-06 09:15 AM

I read too much into things or maybe I don't but Gemma?

Much Love to you and yours:

This line, says so much:

I have lips that wait for your pull

It's beautiful . . . reminded me of a lazy morning (the write) not wanting to get out of bed . . . and not.

*smile*

(I second Raph on killing the beagle part)
*laughing*

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2005-12-06 09:25 AM

and I want you on their verge
in laughter
the way you always have been

in simple love
that is as old
as it is
new.
love your warm words~~~on this cold morning

M

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2005-12-06 10:35 AM

romantica in a velvet cape

enjoyed the blessing of this

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2005-12-06 05:03 PM

what a luscious write
so good to read your art today

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2005-12-06 07:46 PM

such depth ....
    and only scratching the surface


         I travel the arch between
          two such wells of endless
          souls, fevering such pitch
          of curling flesh, crimson
          and trembled, ...
         centered, defined,    waiting ....

CT

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738