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Open Poetry #36

Glass Vibes

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-12-05 07:44 PM

Glass Vibes

Migrating to the evening's dreams
where glass vibes the Murano of.
Gardened by flowers tucked in the mind
with whispering touches, yesterday's love.

Nowhere to go but inside of self,
where climbing higher means taking a chance.
Alone in the glow of the after before,
the garden of knowing brings patterned advance.

Oft to the darkness where treasures are hid,
where sparkle of glass tints the night air with sound.
Where the roses in random drop petals in dance
commitment tied, challenged, temptation bound.

Into the night where a lifetime is spent,
Untangling struggles of loving's intent.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2005-12-05 08:38 PM

Maureen,
This is wonderfully written with interesting turn of phrases and word play. My very favorite to date! The words and message seem melodious to me.

miscellanea

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-12-05 08:42 PM

"Oft to the darkness where treasures are hid,
where sparkle of glass tints the night air with sound.
Where the roses in random drop petals in dance
commitment tied, challenged, temptation bound.

Into the night where a lifetime is spent,
Untangling struggles of loving's intent."

Beautiful Maureen..
It stays with you like a haunting melody.
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2005-12-06 02:46 AM

Enjoyed...James

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-12-06 10:09 AM

M, this poem was especially well-written ~ and memorable.

Kudos on this gem from your pen! ~ Trite, but true!

Hugs of affection,
Linda

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