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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-12-05 08:21 AM


Each Night

Each night I roam and comb my mind
To see beyond the line of blind
I hold a prism to my eyes
To segment past the white of sighs

And when the rainbow shows its face
I start my journey from this place
Glean each color of it’s seem
And use it in the form of dream

Here I’m free to walk each path
Without the blockage of my wrath
Sift the roughage of the old
Filter out the flakes of gold

Weave them to a shawl of pose
Place a rose beneath my nose
Inhale the essence of believe
Bail the fantasy of receive

It is a could be that I do
Come now I ask, wouldn’t you?

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (12-05-2005 10:37 AM).]

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suthern
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1 posted 2005-12-05 08:25 AM


This is just what my Monday morning needed, dear friend. *S* Excellent write!
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2 posted 2005-12-05 09:25 AM


"Weave them to a shawl of pose
Place a rose beneath my nose
Inhale the essence of believe
Bail the fantasy of receive

It is a could be that I do
Come now I ask, wouldn’t you?"

How lovely, and of course I would!
Now..how about a cup of Chai tea this frosty morn.
What?  It's not frosty there?
Well, lets have one anyway.  
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~Let peace begin with me...

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3 posted 2005-12-05 10:09 AM


Weave them to a shawl of pose
Place a rose beneath my nose
Inhale the essence of believe
Bail the fantasy of receive

It is a could be that I do
Come now I ask, wouldn’t you?

Yup!   I would!
Wonderful write this wintery morn.
Hugs to you dear Seymour.  Chris

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-12-05 10:23 AM


suthern
Good morning dear.

Nancy
Love to and thank you.

Chris
Hugs back sweety and a

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2005-12-05 10:23 AM


I wish I knew how...for now it is enough to follow you.
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2005-12-05 10:30 AM


serenity,
My pleasure to have you with me.

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7 posted 2005-12-05 12:53 PM


I hold a prism to my eyes
To segment past the white of sighs

I enjoyed these lines, as I have many Sy that we look through when the sun is out, to take us away from the here and now.

How you see these images to write about over and over is sure beyond me

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2005-12-05 12:57 PM


Sharon,
Nothing is beyond you.

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9 posted 2005-12-05 06:22 PM


I am glad I was able to drop in and read your beautiful poem. They are always such a delight to read.
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-12-05 07:48 PM


SmartChick
And you are a delight when I see you here.

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11 posted 2005-12-06 09:51 PM


The roaming and combing...yes, "that" I know

Love your "penning", Sir Sy

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2005-12-06 10:09 PM


wranx
Love your stopping by and comments, thank you.

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13 posted 2005-12-07 06:18 AM


Weave them to a shawl of pose
Place a rose beneath my nose
Inhale the essence of believe
Bail the fantasy of receive

It is a could be that I do
Come now I ask, wouldn’t you?


Beautiful, as always, Seymour.
I really enjoyed this.
Hugs,
Ethel

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14 posted 2005-12-07 07:48 AM


If that is an invitation...
count me in!







.

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2005-12-07 08:07 AM


Ethel,
Hugs back my dear.

Sunshine,
You ae a love.

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