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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-12-05 08:06 AM

There I stood,
in the center of the ocean,
lonely, barren, desolete,
your ship was lost,
tossed about, by the seas,
upon my sands, you were thrown,
I was your journey,
waiting to be discovered,
desireing to be explored,
no one had crossed,
that barrier before,
the mighty waves,
kept all who had
wandered, at a distance,
you knew how,
to master the storm,
heeding to the glow,
of my light,
through dense fog,
the will of the heart,
is mightier than the sword,
stronger than the seas,
you discovered me,
I was waiting,
to be discovered,
together we have
arrived, where fate,
has brought us,
no longer am I,
an island unto myself,
for I am the world,
the universe,
Paradise, inside
your heart.

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-12-05 02:25 PM

A wonderful cruise, with a happy landing!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-12-05 02:36 PM

Very lovely...nicely done and much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2005-12-05 03:05 PM

"for I am the world,
the universe,
Paradise, inside
your heart."

Yes, it is in the heart that all things are possible. Lovely read! Thanks!

bgj
Member

since 2005-11-09

Posts 128
Ga. USA

4 posted 2005-12-05 08:16 PM

"the will of the heart,
is mightier than the sword,
stronger than the seas,"

A very beautiful poem as usual. Well done.
Peace,
bgj

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-12-06 03:07 AM

Silky...James

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2005-12-06 10:31 AM

May his waters lap to your shore forever more!

Indeed, you do have a romantic heart!

EA

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

7 posted 2005-12-07 01:39 PM

Well I could say the same thing for this ARH that you had said about mine.. I think you know what I mean! I truly love it!

Rich

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2005-12-07 06:42 PM

Lovely, romantic, and beautiful writing ARH! Much enjoyed this wonderful write.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2005-12-08 02:48 AM

AR, I really like this one. Sounds like paradise to me!

....jo

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

10 posted 2005-12-08 05:40 AM

Very good writing on a difficult subject...i applaud your sense of metaphor...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

11 posted 2005-12-11 08:05 AM

enjoyed

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

shades of paul
Member

since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

12 posted 2005-12-14 08:42 PM

A great poem that makes me want to go sailing (in December?).Keep posting.paul

shades of paul

Thekidfre'
Junior Member

since 2005-11-19

Posts 13

13 posted 2005-12-14 08:49 PM

Great write. I enjoyed the pace!

Thekidfre'

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