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timpat92855
New Member

since 2005-12-04

Posts 5

0 posted 2005-12-04 10:27 PM

hey all, im new and just wanted to know if any of ya;ll liked my writing

I noticed today,
That i missed you,
I thought about the times we had,
The good and the bad,
Things like that i wanna forget,
You are such apart of me,
i can feel you at night,
Like a ghost,
You haunt me,
Like all the rest,
You walked out,
Guess it wasnt meant to be,
So i end with this,
I love you,
An goodbye...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2005-12-04 11:37 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is a beautifully heartfelt debut, sweet friend, I can relate to these bittersweet feelings myself, as indeed love can be a very confusing, emotional force, but even when it can ache more than anything else, it is always the most beautiful feeling we have! (sigh) Bless you, sweet friend, I know you're going to fit right in here as we all share these feelings you do and can relate to, I love it, welcome to Passions! (smiles) Ooohhhhh...and please check your e-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here just for you, yay!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2005-12-05 01:48 PM

I like it!

and welcome to Pip!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-12-05 01:50 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Please enjoy your stay with us.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-12-05 05:33 PM

Hey, you can't leave so soon! LOL
Welcome to Passions!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-12-05 05:46 PM

Welcome!! I hope you enjoy your time here!

timpat92855
New Member

since 2005-12-04

Posts 5

6 posted 2005-12-05 09:17 PM

thanks everyone this is the first poetry forum i found and liked, so i will stay here for awhile, i'll post some more of mine later to get some reviews

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2005-12-06 10:31 AM

Welcome to PiP ... enjoy your stay~
Make yourself comfortable, read and reply to the poetry of others and before you know it, you'll definitely feel right at home as friendships start to blossom~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

8 posted 2005-12-08 01:58 AM

welcome to pip ~~=] Great first posting
hope to see more ~wolfman

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