Open Poetry #36 |
I Am Eyes To Her Beauty |
lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
She sees all that is beneath Elysian fields, and embraces the ends of the earth with the hands of God. Her spiritual splendor is clothed in garments of passion and will enlighten my heart to love; Until heavens days have passed away. She descends me into her lovely face. Where her scarlet rose lips rest below her ebony hair and sable eyebrows, careering my soul with her beautiful hands of pearl. Even the moon glows not as bright, the sun is powerless and the stars fall unclear. When she made rule with the skies and the path of lighting that gives radiance to her eyes. Her beauty is born of the wind by the breath of earth and the famed waves of the sea. That roll forth with tender works of immortal sweetness. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lovely writing. Nice to read your words. Welcome to Pips. I hope you enjoy your time in the pages of blue. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Kevin~ Welcome! This is so vivid and beautiful.... we are glad that you have joined us, and hope you enjoy your stay.... please check your email for a special greeting from all here at passions Greeneyes~ In your light I learn how to love |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Thank you for you kind words and your warm welcome to your forum. I'm glad to be aboard...! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome to Pip, I really enjoyed this |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Much enjoyed your debut post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Thank you a much appreciated welcome! Happy to be here!! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Welcome!! I must admit this was beautiful, warms me up on this dreary rainy day.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Thank you for your thoughts on my work. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I lift my glass to a remarkable toast and tribute. I very much enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Kevin! We hope that you will find many ways in which to express yourself within our blue walls... If you have any questions, just contact a moderator. We are here to help you become comfortable and feel right at home! |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Thank you serenity blaze for your comment..! |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Sunshine, I appreciate you welcoming me to Passions. It is a pleasure being a aboard..! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
these eyes of yours have gifted us a beautiful portrait! WELCOME to Pips! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful and Welcome!! take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter. |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Thank you both so very much for your replies.! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Thanks James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how precious this is welcome to Passions |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Thank you very much for your thoughts!!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions good read |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
welcome. -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (; |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
thank u |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome to Passions !!! . . . bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Thank you very much, i'm happy to be here! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to PIP. I see the beauty! |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Thank you!! |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Kevin- This is a great write... one that I wish I wre able to have done. Welcome to our little family. I think you'll enjoy your stay. http://www.mysticwicks.com |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Thank for your comment and for welcoming me to Passions. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Sounds like a lovely lady ,luckey to know her |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello and welcome to Passions In Poetry. This is such a beautfiul poem. I especially like the last verse....... Her beauty is born of the wind by the breath of earth and the famed waves of the sea. That roll forth with tender works of immortal sweetness. I hope you enjoy your time at PIP. Hugs, Ethel GG |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
thank you |
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