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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-12-03 01:20 PM



Memories that are yet to find,
still searches my mind,
it is far behind.

When you look into your past,
things will come back to you at last ,
it will pass through an upper class.

Life can interesting,
when you find,
that someone really cares for you,
through the inner-mind.

Sometimes it takes longer,
then you can bare,
just remember, you will soon get somewhere.

When you look inside your memories,
you will know,
that you are forgiven,
for what pain is shown.

Life goes on,
don't worry about your past,
just look inside the good things,
make your laughter last.

You know I am right,
for what you want to feel,
just be yourself,
you know how to deal.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-12-03 02:15 PM


Very nicely written Laura..
and a good message within.
Hugs~Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...

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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
2 posted 2005-12-03 06:02 PM


I agree with my sister Enchantress. Well done Laura. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Dreamer@
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since 2003-04-13
Posts 38
Denmark
3 posted 2005-12-03 06:08 PM


Smile

Great read.

i love when i can read that people think about there lives and makes bad and sad into good and well done.

Another smile

Jes / Dreamer

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