Open Poetry #36 |
Heart and Soul |
bgj Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 128Ga. USA |
Heart and Soul There’s a soul adrift on the sea of sorrow Dreading the dawn of every tomorrow, Living on dreams of love now past Broken promises that did not last. There’s a shattered heart that longs to mend Blown about in a painful wind, Wishing for just one more chance To join in loves tender dance. There’s a troubled mind full of hopeless thoughts That remembers an angel it once caught, But taken for granted in too many ways The angel it loved just could not stay. A love once flourished, strong and clear Filled with wonder, precious and dear But too many mistakes day by day, And slowly it perished and faded away. Bobby G. Jarrard |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
the heart is in loving .... the soul is in understanding, a precious write! CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I think this is a very beautiful and well written poem. I enjoyed it very much. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW, you and I are on the same page ....seems like you had written this for me. Great Poem...even though it was a sad one! ~ARH |
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bgj Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 128Ga. USA |
Yes ARH, a page well known by many people I'm afraid. Thanks everyone for your kind words. Peace to all, bgj |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A very heartfelt write... Well done! Hugs~Nancy ~Let peace begin with me... |
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