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RennieandBoo
Junior Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 47
Florida!

0 posted 2005-12-02 03:33 PM


You said you got
What I need
You said you got
What I want
Telling me that
You're gonna make
A WOMAN out of me

But Baby, Baby
What I really want
Is a man who can provide
SATISFACTION
Yeah, that's what I said
SATISFACTION

That's my favorite word
By the way
I know what my needs are
I know how to get my wants
And Baby, Baby
You're not the man I want

But Baby, Baby
All I want and need is
SATISFACTION
And you're no man
that could make a WOMAN out of me
Just need satisfacton
For a woman like me

"Don't try to fix me, I'm not broken"
Evanesence; Hello

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
1 posted 2005-12-03 10:43 AM




A Letter

You write that you are ill, confused.  The trees
Outside the window of the room they gave you
Are wet with tears each morning when they wake you
Out of the sleep you never quite fall into.
There is some dream of traffic in your head

That stops and goes, and goes, and does not stop
Sometimes all night, all day.  The motorcade
Winds past you like the funeral cortege
of someone famous you had slept with, once or twice.
(Another fit of tears dampens the leaves, the page.)

You would expose your wounds, pull down your blouse,
Unbosom yourself wholly to the young doctor
Who has the power to sign prescriptions, passes,
Who seems to like you...And so to pass
Into the city once again, one of us,

Hurrying by the damp trees of a park
Toward a familiar intersection where
The traffic signal warns you not to cross,
To wait, just as before, alone---but suddenly
Ten years older, tamed now, less mad, less beautiful.


Donald Justice


Jaime Fradera
Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable
2 posted 2005-12-03 09:11 PM


o, a woman who knows what she wants and makes NO BONES  about it!
Mmmmmmmy what a wonderfully sensuous read!  Jaime

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