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Understanding
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Understanding |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA 
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Understanding You... All I need from you is understanding, Why is our relationship never holding up to me being so demanding, We should at least be kind enough to listen to each other instead of bickering. Understanding you should be easy, In doing so my eyes and almost always start tearing, You are my mentor, my role model and my best friend, And you always will be, that is until my life comes to an end. In my eyes I'll never stop loving you the way that I do, My eyes will never have shame showing through in any way towards you, And I mean that, and I mean that, I really mean that for sure, I believe that for the way I feel there is no to cure. Understanding you should be easy, In doing so my eyes almost always start tearing, You are my mentor, my role model and my best friend, And you always will be, that is until my life comes to an end. I hope that someday the relationship between us will get better, So that as you breathe your last few breaths on this earth we can cry on each others shoulders togather, The love that doesn't always look or sound like it is around will then very brightly show through to you. I hope this song reaches out to your heart, Well before we ever part, Whether it be by losing a life or a change in location, I hope our gratitude towards each other will someday change and we can laugh happily as a mother and daughter eventually once again. Understanding you should be so easy, In doing so my eyes almost always start tearing, You are my mentor, my role model and my best friend, And you always will be, that is until my life comes to an end. I love you, I love you, I love you. I love you and will always for an eternity. Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhKelly~ I hope everyone reads this through to the ending~ What a wonderful pre-Christmas gift that any mom would cherish~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Thank you Marge. I'm glad you liked it. :-) *~Kelly~* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh Kelly, this is so beautiful! I certainly hope that you frame and wrap this up for your mother. It's an absolute LOVE gift! Thank you so much for sharing this! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a song that would touch any heart. Lovingly written. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Kacy~ I'm glad you liked it. And I'll keep that idea in mind  *~Kelly~* |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Kajay~ Thanks for reading and replying. When I wrote it I was hoping it would display itself like a song. *~Kelly~* |
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silverwind Junior Member
since 2005-12-07
Posts 37that place over there |
If I could write the notes I would send you the music for those lovely words. silverwind |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Silverwind~ Thank you I'm glad you liked it.*~Kelly~* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
James~ Glad you enjoyed it. *~Kelly~* |
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