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CastleGuard
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0 posted 2005-12-01 04:19 PM



in the lagoon of her love
he swam freely,
wearing the jagged rocks smooth...
the scars...
he embraced;
a painted manifest  
of their journey,
a mosaic of life
impelled by dreams,
carried by reality

and stitched by love
unsinkable

CG

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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-12-01 07:55 PM


Very nice CG. Much enjoyed reading this.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-12-02 06:16 AM


Every word was beautiful! Loved it!

~ARh

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-12-02 06:46 AM


even in loss, or in hard times, love proves most powerful
Enjoyed!

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