Our Lady of Perpetual Admonition

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Open Poetry #36

Our Lady of Perpetual Admonition

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-12-01 09:21 AM

At some point
In that liturgy
One begins to feel uneasy

Who is this priest
To determine us unworthy
Of the air we breathe

That sin
Which expands each day
Is the burden we carry
And must atone for every waking hour

While just outside
Even in winter
Equally innocent sparrows
Struggle only to find
Those innocuous little joys
As sparrows can

Through cold and snow
Under clouds or blue

Alone or together
Without harm to others
In whatever life they have

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

1 posted 2005-12-01 10:20 AM

I surely do not know, but it's something to think about anyway.

Enjoyed the way you made me think.

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-04-20 10:49 PM

so many questions in life, we should have.

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