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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2005-12-01 08:00 AM



November Thoughts


November calls the heart back home
To warmth and pumpkin pie
The geese have left this winter dome
To find a bluer sky

But I just want a warmer bed
A nice thick quilt of down
With feathers from the goose who fled
The bleaker side of town

Will I prefer this icy cage
To life’s most southern shore?
Would I not fly this frigid stage,
To walk through summer’s door?

No, no not I
I will not fly
No matter what the winter sky

Some think just like a feathered bird
The season is to be
That winter makes us prisoner
And spring time sets us free

But I, when faced with coming storms
I live a rabbit’s whim
I find a hollow soft and warm
And safely burrow in

In ice, the soul will always thrive
The mind will stay apart
And love is love, and will survive
The seasons of the heart

I will not fly
I’ll stay alive
My heart is strong and will survive


Elizabeth Santos

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-12-01 08:30 AM


this entire poem, speaks softly of your heart, but that very last part, my lady, is you, inside and out...your a dynomo of music...which will forever wave a flag of glory in many hearts....thank you for this, and for you....
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2005-12-01 08:38 AM


Liz, not only is your heart strong, your indominable spirit is as well!

May you not only survive, but thrive, all the seasons of the heart.

An exceptionally lovely write, lovely lady!

Sending you a loving hug,
Linda


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3 posted 2005-12-01 09:41 AM


LovelyLizzyLady~
Were I to *sigh* upon this day
I'd try do it poetically
But never in this new December
could I match your loving thoughts of November~

You are BEAUTIFUL~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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peppermint35
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4 posted 2005-12-01 10:12 AM


as long as the warmth is within, then you will never be cold.

Thanks for the share.

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Martie
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5 posted 2005-12-01 10:52 AM


Liz, dear friend......you warm this cold first day of December, all the way out to California!!  Your words are beautiful, as always!     
pictureme2
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6 posted 2005-12-01 12:28 PM


very warmly written. Left me with the smell
of apple pie :-)
Nicely done.
pictureme2

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-12-01 09:51 PM


Elizabeth,
May you have what your heart craves.
A delightful read.

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8 posted 2005-12-01 10:29 PM


But I, when faced with coming storms
I live a rabbit’s whim
I find a hollow soft and warm
And safely burrow in


Up here we just call this hunkering down.   Nice downy poem m'friend.

Suetang
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9 posted 2005-12-01 11:39 PM


Elizabeth

Everything about this write was absolutely perfect, in particular the outstanding imagery.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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10 posted 2005-12-02 12:34 PM


An excellent piece of poetry!!
It is so beautiful, as always.
Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
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11 posted 2005-12-02 12:40 PM


Liz, you're such a wiz with words!  Another one for my library.  Not only do I enjoy reading your words, but I always find value in them!   .....jo
Nan
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12 posted 2005-12-02 10:40 PM


Hunkering down here... There's a nice warm burrow waiting to be occupied for sure.  Thanks for your wondrous wisdom, dear lady...
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