Open Poetry #36 |
p street channel matinee |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
we introduced ourselves yesterday like we were first times in cellophane wrappers but we knew how to undo the veils even with our minds closed we were tiptoes playing in dry water behind the blinds of the tree people you wore shimmer speak minimize with naughty buttons and lotion on your hands to make that whisper sound when you smoothed your skin and I wore you with my eyes in something dark with pale a cake and eat it too gown imagination long legged above the high heals and happy times sitting on the edge of beds by streams letting our thought water run laughing together then when we splashed in puddles and made insatiable angels in the warm down meadows of our vanilla scented seaside _____ daark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is so reminiscent of McKuen's work... and you know he is one of my favorites... but you're working hard to be number one... Good morning, DS... . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
my ohhhh my but your in fine form this morning....I can almost feel that inception all the way from the east coast...inspirational music in the ears of the reader...oh, you do what you do so well.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine, a pleasure to be compared if even with squinted eyes and stretched imagination, to rod..thank you lady frind ___________ ms leej, thank you for the east coast drive by..you warm my pen with your touch, and as always you smile me. thank you [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-01-2005 11:49 AM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The P Channel.....lessee, I've heard of the Sports Channel, Home Improvement Channel, whole network called Home Shopping....P Channel...wonder what it's about....and whether people have to pay to watch! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"in the warm down meadows of our vanilla scented seaside" How beautiful and love filled is the scene you paint! I wonder where this P street is? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful scented visions you leave us with Dark. N'joyed this... laughing together then when we splashed in puddles and made insatiable angels in the warm down meadows of our vanilla scented seaside |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
(big grin) a channel off of Ventura Harbor, down by the marina off of P street.. [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-02-2005 06:02 PM).] |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Whisper of fingertip water beautiful! - Owl |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
sensually devine My spirit will rise |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
always a sensual read. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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