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Open Poetry #36

Month Change Wednesday

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2005-12-01 02:44 AM

A forgotten November snaps brittle winter chilled twigs
flowing wind blows over man-made lakes of asphalt
headlight animlas swim cross-current
illuminate barren trees grasping at season change
and I sta under those pining oaks
humming mummbled melodies of a forlorn song
"Leave it be boy, leave it be
this life is for you to wonder
we all will becom pet names,
pet names for existence
decisions become middle ground
for heaven and hell to coinced
upon a souls demise
and your love see's you as cellophane"
A melody so evil plagued my ear for that moment
when embraced i became by a long dormant sun's harmony.
"Oh, estranged love of mine
i wish to admire you
and cherish your life
with all adjectives
that my tongue can produce
but you must open your eyes.
my decisions will be mine
and a breath of relief then will be mine to own."

(I'm not sure about this. I just had to write and this is what came.)

nice use of muffin

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-12-01 01:43 PM

a mixture of images here
sometimes the pen goes where it wants

I enjoyed that headlight line

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-12-01 02:17 PM

a buffet of visuals...enjoyed especially

headlight animlas swim cross-current

could picture elk...

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