Open Poetry #36 |
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Kneeling |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia ![]() |
Never will you see me there, but often I do pray Within the hours of last week, or maybe yesterday You will not find me wishing or joining hands in prayer You’ll only find a hopeful shell of man that’s kneeling there Within me there’s an altar; I pray to when the need Where all my words can disappear within a hope to seed And from their growth I see things and much I do receive Returned are crops that feed my soul so I again believe I do believe there’s better or someone who’ll be there That while in promise I commit, I’ll find someone to care That miracles might well appear and help that I might see How prayers and hopes encourage paths we take and what will be I kneel unto the alter, to seed my words of prayer And when I do I’m granted strength by power that is there And then the weight I had does leave and I find I can smile So often now in course of day, I pray a little while |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Rick...You wrote me like a book in this prayerful poem. I do the same thing. Thanks for sharing, enjoyed very very much...Paul Definately a ![]() ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Paul, thank you so much for your reply, I do often and it does help, great to see your reply, much appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rick "Within me there’s an altar; I pray to when the need Where all my words can disappear within a hope to seed And from their growth I see things and much I do receive Returned are crops that feed my soul so I again believe" A beautiful, spirit centered poem!! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a lovely finger trace in spirit and in deep hearted thoughts. Enjoyed your write very much. TD |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Martie, thank you for your reply, much enjoyed and heart felt, good to see you here. TD, I enjoyed you reply my friend, thank you for sharing some thoughts and your time. To you both my friends, thank you for the visit and comments. Till again, be well and take care. Sincerely Rick |
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