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Hallucination
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0 posted 2005-11-26 06:19 AM


A night...
The night..
Such a fragile sight, such a rusty light,
Such a waste what man's become.
The nights ABC, swallows a country,
Leaving a breath feeling numb.

Like a shattered glass
Glued back together,
Soon some will notice
The line of each crack.
A night...
The night...

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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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1 posted 2005-11-26 08:26 AM


nice write, and good flow to it, keep up the awesome poetry.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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2 posted 2005-11-26 10:11 AM


Hey, no fair....you're makin' me think here!

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