Open Poetry #36 |
The Night |
Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
A night... The night.. Such a fragile sight, such a rusty light, Such a waste what man's become. The nights ABC, swallows a country, Leaving a breath feeling numb. Like a shattered glass Glued back together, Soon some will notice The line of each crack. A night... The night... |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
nice write, and good flow to it, keep up the awesome poetry. Poetry can get you very far |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hey, no fair....you're makin' me think here! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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