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OwlSA
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0 posted 2005-11-24 04:38 PM


Tonight
November 1999

Tonight my wide African sky
whispered its greeting to me
in an artist’s palette of multitudinous blues and greys;
and infinity ebbed into
my breathing,
my thinking,
my being,
like the serene voices of monks at evensong;
and the clouds carried my reply
to my brother,
the sky.

- Owl

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Ratleader
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1 posted 2005-11-28 03:16 PM


I've never seen your sky, and probably never will....not with eyes, at least. Still, I feel I know a bit of it now, through its effect on you, and in the reverence in your voice as you tell us of it.

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iliana
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2 posted 2005-11-28 03:25 PM


Gorgeous rendering!  So serene!
Enchantress
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3 posted 2005-11-28 04:46 PM


Very calming...I would love to see your sky.
Hugs~

OwlSA
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4 posted 2005-11-29 12:27 PM


Thank you Ratleader, iliana and Enchantress.  I wish I could send you all some of my sky.  It is very beautiful.  I love my country very much and I sorta think it shows.  My life is so mega-stressed at the moment and seeking serenity keeps me sane - or as sane as I want to be!

- Owl

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5 posted 2005-11-30 01:21 PM


With your words, we are there... and I thank you. *S* Beautiful!
Martie
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6 posted 2005-11-30 01:27 PM


Owl

A beautiful, descriptive poem...enjoyed!  

LeeJ
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7 posted 2005-11-30 02:18 PM


you describ your part of the world like a vision, and I feel it...thank you
OwlSA
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8 posted 2005-12-01 01:50 PM


Thank you Suthern, Martie and LeeJ.  I am glad that my words could bring you my beautiful sky brother.

- Owl

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