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evomx5 Member
since 2005-07-11
Posts 52Atlanta, GA |
How can you be so beautiful And not see it for yourself Is it that you choose to ignore it Hoping that no one will mention it It’s obvious, you know? It shows in every word you write It shows in your romantic heart Every little nuance of you, revealed But, you see the little flaws That only you would know about While I see you, and I know you You steal a little more of my heart every day And now – now you have all of me All the love that I possess Given with ease to your timid charms And your casual elegance Never to ask for its return Hoping you keep it for eternity And in doing so, keep me As the one you love – forever. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Given with ease to your timid charms And your casual elegance" The she of this sounds wonderful. Lucky is he that can write of her with knowledge.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah, the whiles of a woman, who knows how. All's well that ends well though.  Nice write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just gorgeous! |
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she'll_be_apples Junior Member
since 2005-07-11
Posts 22 |
just lovely |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful My spirit will rise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
It shows in your (romantic heart) Every little nuance of you, revealed... I loved the whole poem! just beautiful!!! but this line above was my favorite..hmmm I wonder why? LOL ~Hugs ARH  "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh, you know, this is just lovely. I truly adore this and actually wish I had written it. It just sings . . . |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
lucky lucky girl... I sure do enjoy reading you! |
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