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This Tall and Slender Tree, He
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This Tall and Slender Tree, He |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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This Tall and Slender Tree, He This was the time a year ago when I feared the color of the future dark were her threads and he was falling into the dry dirt dead I was grateful for the sky then and the purple heads of iris even the bubbles from fish a river running and especially for the most kindly eyes of children To kiss the hurt away I swore each day to be soft comfort and yet strong I could and would hold him feed him all day and night long I would be fast ready with a smile and sing his favorite anything tender skin rub with oils and clean the throw up pan again and then again be at its mercy it was so thirsty Now he lives! he cleared the road with brave small knife and took each turn with curve to right he mourned the poems in my head I was so full of fear and dread And though I cried then all the time he didn’t see the rivulets run the cheeks he loved instead he thought were comely and even what was bliss the most to feel is not a joke that grows now is for real Alive alight with what could be sure his feet are not for slipping this year I hit my knees for giving another year with me this tall and slender tree he ------------ for my husband Taylor who won his fight with cancer, I am grateful |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful poem of thanksgiving and love. *S* |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beautifull and inspiration full of love and devotion at its finest hour |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dear Martie the love, devotion and thankfulness that poured from your pen in this writing reduced me to tears..I am so pleased to hear that Taylor is doing well. May you both have a blessed Thanksgiving, especially after the turmoil and stuggle of the past year. Hugs and luv to you both, Nancy. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
i've said in a few replies today but it's true, i don't reply much but i always read and you are and always will be a favourite of mine. hugs |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Alive, alight... ~*~ So many reasons to give Thanks this season... Taylor being a shining example of what Love can pull through the needle's eye...  to both of you...Love, Sissie . |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Such a wonderful reason for giving Thanks. Keeping you both in my prayers, Martie. Bob |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh Martie, this is something to be most grateful for.. so many are not blessed so.  and a reminder to all that there is always someone with a heavier load.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It heals my own heart to see this poem....I don't doubt that you understood these words in my own poem ( /pip/Forum93/HTML/001231.html ) were Taylor's when I wrote them...and now I can say it for everyone. I know a man too gentle for the world, so bruised, so bruised; somehow he finds the strength to stand and take it yet again, like flowers patiently regrowing after fire and storm, while life drains more of life out of his weary frame. You love him, and if he could heal and grow and bloom, be strong again for you... I found a place for such a man, a valley of green and sheltered cliffs, soft rain, cool sun, where always there is growth and gentle life; I made a prayer within that place the way Hawaiians do, of hope and love, of leaf and stone, and left it there for him, for you. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Yes, dear Ed...I know, and I have no doubt that your prayer was instramental to his healing. I thank you from a humbled heart.  |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you my Pip friends for replying to this with such loving words. I haven't been able to write for some time, today a chip came out of the dam...perhaps more will fall into the river, with time. Happy Thanksgiving everyone! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - a very special poem about a very special man from a very special woman - I so enjoy seeing both of you and am so very Thankful also that Taylor is still talking cars and flowers and music with m e when I visit - I am thankful that you are such a good friend also - love both of you - Paul |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Martie - Between each letter of this beautiful poem (and one doesn't need a magnifying glass) the word "love" jumps out and hits one between the eyes. My best wishes to you both and I'm sure this thanksgiving day will be especially meaningful. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: It happens that way, Sissie... and such it is, that even when we can't walk in the forest, we still feel it when the redwood crashes... and know the sound. . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am so happy for you both that there was Light at the end of that long, dark tunnel! Indeed, you have a lot to be "Thankful" for this Thanksgiving! God bless you all. An extremely moving piece of writing from your very core. Love & Healing Light, Linda  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Thank you for sharing this giving of thanks! I wish you both all the best!!!!!!! *hug* |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Martie The tree metaphor is indeed effective. You have used it very well... * A tall slender tree A little weak but standing By love, is healing A nearby flower watches Tending its needs with her heart * Peace to you and the tall slender tree, dear flower.. -----------ice ><> |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
What a blessing! The Lord has looked warmly down upon the brave love your husband and you share Martie. This Thanksgiving is truly a celebration. Holiday Hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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andy04 Junior Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 22New South Wales |
i was very touched when i read this. i hope you both remain happy. andy04 the simplest thing in life is love |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It sure has been quite a year for so many, and for some, even a happy ending. I am so thankful for that. Here's to you both, and to a beautiful Thanksgiving poem. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Martie, Very touching. From one old lady who has been there... now just make each day count and enjoy. The best is yet to come. Blessings to you both. martyjo |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Martie, what a wonderful piece this is!!!! And even more so, is your wonderful miracle! Happy Thanksgiving! ....jo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love this Martie... with tears in my eyes, I can say no more in type to you and yours and have a Wonderful ThanksgivingM |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
there are battles and there are wars and there are times of peace when only the prayers wear ribbons enjoyed you here ms martie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Just as I sent prayers in time of need, I now send praise to Him for the healing of Taylor~ This is a joyous time of the heart~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is incredibly beautiful Martie...give him a hug from me ok? And here's a hug for you m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And though I cried then all the time he didn’t see the rivulets run the cheeks he loved instead he thought were comely and even what was bliss the most to feel is not a joke that grows now is for real Alive alight with what could be sure his feet are not for slipping this year I hit my knees for giving another year with me this tall and slender tree he ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ and there will be many more lovely leafs to write of this tree.  yessss ... Happy Thanksgiving Thru the water...thru the rain |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you, this... so special... Martie. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
and you could not have said it better... I am thankful as well and I hope you and your husband continue to have many happy and wonderful moments for years to come. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How beautiful and touching, dear Martie. You really give a special meaning to this Thanksgiving. Your words are a gift of love, to your husband and to the readers as well. God bless. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~heartfelt happy hugs to both of you~ and thanking you, sister Martie for sharing the heart and essence of Thanksgiving |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
Dearest Martie, I could relate to your poem, hit home base in alot of places. Blessings to you and your tree! Thanks for sharing this. pictureme2 |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a beautifully written piece. Such strength between you two that you have forged! May it only grow stronger. Hugs Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Martie...I am so happy for you and Taylor. I'm sure you played a big part is his will to beat this terrible demon. Bless both of you for not giving up...Paul The poem...As always a heart touching masterpiece. ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OH sweet marite... forgive me for not checking in with you sooner. Am I too late to share a celebratory hug? I love you lady! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you, my friends, for the replies. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I too am blessed. Dropped a short line to ya on the 29th. Stay Blessed, Dale Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is such a tender poem, Martie. Full of heart. Corinne |
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