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A Seem
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A Seem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Seem A Monday seemed a Sunday And the dew a comely green A linger filled my mind that day Just to stay within the scene I wondered towards the window Exposed my eyes the mornings sun And slowly watched the dawn in glow And in that moment we were one I drifted out the window pane Without the signing of a lease Without the heavy weight of sane And found a moments cloak of peace A Monday seemed a Sunday And the dew a comely green I lingered in my mind that day Just to stay within the scene I’m sure it was desires coup But what a feeling, what a view |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A daydreamer's delight this morning Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy....Aren't windows wonderful?!! Yours sure is!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I absolutely ADORE this ... and YOU~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, this is so lovely... Think I'll sit here awhile and look out the window with you. Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Yes, thank you. Martie I agree, thank you. Marge  Nancy You are a sweetheart. |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
This was really nicely done and well written. Thanks for sharing your window view! I applaud you for your nice flow of all of your writes. pictureme2 |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely write. It's amazing what one can see when looking out a window. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Sir T! I enjoyed the view through your window!   Hugs with love, EA |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It seems to me this one is well done, Sy  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I sure like your lingering write and it will linger in my library for as long as Ron allows us to have libraries. Happy Thanksgiving, Sy! .....jo |
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