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SarBear
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0 posted 2005-11-19 11:00 PM


I feel this pain deep down inside,
Yet, lately it's been so easy to hide.
Taken so long to finally feel,
All these things that I know are real.
A chilling thought that they may come stumbling out,
Seems so easy to forget since I've tried so hard not to remember.
And it's hard, I want to let it out.
The only truth on the outside,
are the tears I seldom ely set free.
The inside, I've kept shielded,
it's but a memory, a dream.
The numbness has taken over,
Enveloped in the eery cold.
As my eyes shut each night,
I don't even think.
Wish I could heal all these invisible wounds,
but they are only scars,
hidden by bright smiles and cheery words.


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1 posted 2005-11-20 12:02 PM


SarBear

Many of us have scars, in fact, most of us have scars...I sure do.  Poetry has helped me to express the feelings or events that caused them, and therefore to heal the hurt.  Keep writing...it really is good for you.  Wishing you the best.  

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2 posted 2005-11-20 12:12 PM


As my eyes shut each night,
I don't even think.
Wish I could heal all these invisible wounds,
but they are only scars,
hidden by bright smiles and cheery words
  
  
    
great work sarbear ...it's important to express how you really do feel , how you feel deep down in your heart ....and for the healing of the invisible , a little time will heal those scars ....be easy on yourself while your young  
peace ~wolfman

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3 posted 2005-11-20 01:48 AM


yes we all do have scars. and thanks to poetry there not kept open wounds

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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4 posted 2005-11-20 10:01 AM


Tears make a poor wine....the longer you hold them, the more they turn to vinegar. I'm glad I stumbled upon this little beauty!

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