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Open Poetry #36

Their Being

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-11-19 03:28 PM

Perhaps

it was the Gipsy in her eyes that took my soul

or reality

or eyes that crossed

In the comfort of my eyes she sought my soul

And on the sand length of playing field

I never sought the first

nor

in reality

the second

my presence crossed to her family

In my soul I blessed the beauty and comfort of the women

To enjoy the presience

But not the understanding

Of women

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2005-11-19 04:07 PM

Yes, some of us women can be hard to figure out, Dave. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

2 posted 2005-11-20 01:41 AM

beautiful.
the flow in this
and the way your words
are placed
make it everything.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2005-11-20 01:45 AM

good words dave

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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