Open Poetry #36 |
Joy's Faith |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Joy seems, at times, bent, rent with pain But never, m’dear, fear the light Hoar frost seeps in, a yearly gain Our whispers are heard through the night Where are the hands that held this heart? ‘Tis memories holding tight Emotions seem to fall apart… ‘Tis love that Faith will bring things right. In the gray of month and falling leaves When life was tired of its achieve Memories became birds flocking the sky Somehow God’s pain finds a quiet sigh All know that living comes full complete When circles come round and edges meet As we are held within love’s sweet ring Circled in warmth that empathy brings |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you always seem to say the right thing at the right time. and you always bring sunshine My spirit will rise |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I loved the format of the begining Karilea and of course the rest of it was pretty good as well! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~beautiful~ Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
All know that living comes full complete When circles come round and edges meet As we are held within love’s sweet ring Circled in warmth that empathy brings An eternal truth that can be never be forgotten or said enough. Well said. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
We are limited to three sets of words You write 3-dimensionally Yes Sunshine another rough week but at least I am getting the time to write on Piptalk Take care Dave |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I heard a soft whisper ... and found from whence it came~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie "All know that living comes full complete When circles come round and edges meet As we are held within love’s sweet ring Circled in warmth that empathy brings" I wish that I had written this!! Such truth in the beauty of your words. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this was a joy to read, thanks for sharing, keep up the awesome poetry... Poetry can get you very far |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Encouragement comes in all forms but when it comes from sunshine's wing the world is brighter for it. Lovely sensitive write. Congratulations on the book. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
For things such as these, there's no time quite so right as, NOW.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
thank you for the encouraging words formed into such a lovely write...sigh...one can never have too much encouragement ... especially when one's joy is crying |
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