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Open Poetry #36

Effervescent

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-11-19 04:34 AM

Oh, your words,touch so deep,
dusts the cobwebs away,
bringing heart to life,

Cover me, smother me,
so alive, they caress,
you are a gentleman,

Gentle,flame that warms,
exhilaration, taking me,
on that dizzy journey,

Fuse our souls together,
loves fuel ignites,
combustion, explodes,

A heart pumps, again,
flowing with hot love,
so alive, so alive.

and I died in your arms
tonight,loving you,
becuse you are so,
effervescent.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2005-11-19 05:07 AM

A very lively and exciting poem..i enjoyed..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2005-11-19 09:24 AM

ARH~

Thank you for the very sweet reply to one of mine.

I did enjoy this piece from you....

but I am dying to know about your new picture...I was shocked when I saw it..it is completely different than your other pictures!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

3 posted 2005-11-19 09:32 AM

and alas a night of passion must fail

as dawn enters an early light

of reality

Dave

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2005-11-19 09:05 PM

Actually this poem was about words, notice I stated in the first line, "Your Words"...it is about two people emailing, talking but never seeing the other physically.

The poem itself had nothing to do with Physical love. It was about words and how passionate, powerful they(The words) become, without one touch.

As for the new Photo...(It is a safety precaution) email me and i will tell you why.
Thanks for the replys

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

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