Open Poetry #36 |
Shards of Love |
CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
How beautiful love is... this crystal vase containing the heart; brilliant and pure, hues of rainbow under light... but, oh Lord, when dissonance strikes! it shatters into thousand shards... some blunt, some incisive as a gleaming scalpel’s edge no anaesthetic can temper the pain but time... even when the last shard has dissolved the scars will remain forever. CG |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Who would think there is beauty in pain, but you find words that make everything, beautiful! ~FL "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Memory Of Love— Terms and Conditions We were like children who didn’t want to Come out of the sea. And the blue night came And then the black night. What did we bring back for the rest of our lives, A flaming face, like the burning bush That won’t consume itself till the end of our lives. We made a strange arrangement between us: If you come to me, I’ll come to you, Strange terms and conditions: If you forget me. I’ll forget you. Strange terms and lovely things. The ugly things we had to do For the rest of our lives. Yehuda Amichai |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
CG ~ A unique perspective ~ and highly effective! Yes, 'tis sadly true, what ye hath so expertly scribed. A fine piece of crystal-clear writing! EA |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx for the write CG, and yes...they do last for quite some time....have a few of my own. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Dissonance, or a perfect note, so clear the glass cannot resist.....it dies singing, but the result is the same. Much to think about in this little poem. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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