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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-11-18 05:19 AM

Nights darkness grows,
be still my heart,
colder, a wind blows,
freezing every part,

Feeling goes numb,
no longer exsisting,
eyes are dark plumb,
memory keeps insisting,

Nothing have I become,
tomorrow I resist,
my heart is undone,
no pulse at the wrist,

Loves grave, open wide,
bury deep, memorys token,
where I go to hide,
a heart dies, broken,

Pieces lay smashed,
all torn and shattered,
dreams died, crashed,
none of it really mattered,

Memorys ghost will appear,
playing tricks on the mind,
A true love sincere,
all that is left behind.

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

PouringJewels
Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

1 posted 2005-11-18 05:31 AM

when your memory ghost appears again,
Take a deep breath and know only strength and good, today will bring.

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2005-11-18 05:36 AM

I class these two stanzas as a poem by themselves, they could easily stand alone-
My favorites of the piece, although the rest is very well done.

The poem fits your username very well..You can tell it comes straight from "A Romantic Heart"...

Enjoyed
----------ice
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[This message has been edited by ice (11-18-2005 06:47 AM).]

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2005-11-18 06:39 AM

such heart is a beacon
    among such dark, cold, windy nights ....



                 ... depth becomes you!

  CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2005-11-18 07:59 AM

Such a pity for a person to feel this way..with all of the talent you posses i shall never give up on you....at least you deserve that much...enjoyed this imensely..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-11-18 08:58 AM

the depth of this is extremely profound

and I love the way you've taken truth and allowed your voice be heard

beautifully written and expressed

luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

6 posted 2005-11-18 11:07 AM

oh yes, you and I write from the same place, wow, its incredible the similarities

wishing you grace for today and tomorrow

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2005-11-18 12:07 PM

Dear Lady ARH,

I felt a great sadness, reading this poem; a feeling of hopelessness, reaching out from the deepest abyss of an aching human heart. I would venture to say that we have all felt like that at some point in our lives, though many of us would have kept those feelings suppressed. But I feel human hearts have a great capacity to heal, to be reborn - if we only let them.

There is a Light leading us out of the darkness...just look to the stars...and it will show us the way...

A beautiful, heart wrenching write.

CG

bgj
Member

since 2005-11-09

Posts 128
Ga. USA

8 posted 2005-11-18 05:25 PM

A sad but beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading this very much. Lots of luck,
bgj

"May peace and love forever light your way"

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