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The Next Poem I Write
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The Next Poem I Write |
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fmlbarebackrider2001 Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 138West Texas, United States 
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The next poem I write Will have a misty mountain morning somewhere in Colorado With a soft pink sunrise The next poem I write Will have ten wild horses Many of them brown and black Running to keep their freedon Only stopping to graze The next poem I write Will have wide-open spaces With healthy knee high grass And little pink flowers That sway as I dance The next poem I write Will have a Man bigger Than life With eyes that are older than Time. Know yourself before you try to know someone else. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions! Enjoyed your first post. Have fun here. Chris  Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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bgj Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 128Ga. USA |
Nice poem. Paints a lovely picture. Lots of luck, bgj |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Welcome to Passions, I hope you enjoy your time here, please check your email for a special greeting..... Greeneyes~ ~~**~~ |
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fmlbarebackrider2001 Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 138West Texas, United States |
Thank you for the kind comments. I look forward to reading what you guys have to write and posting some of my own. Thanks and Hugs, Cory Know yourself before you try to know someone else. |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
Nice job! I hope you'll share the next poem you write! This one left me with a lovely image! keep on keeping on! pictureme2 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cory~ A hearty WELCOME TO PiP ! I will be anticipating reading the 'next poem'~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
oh I like this, I know these emotions deeply..... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS CORY!  |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome to Passions Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cory I am also anticipating the next poem I write. Welcome to Passions! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Cory you have word painted some wonderful images, I enjoyed this very much. Welcome to Passions! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
A very inspirational first write. Welcome to Passions. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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fmlbarebackrider2001 Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 138West Texas, United States |
Thank you all for your very kind words. It's very touching to know that people like my work. God Bless, Cory Know yourself before you try to know someone else. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
And the next poem you write, I will read. I loved your beautiful poem, and not just because of the horses, although they were a major drawcard. I gather from your nom de plume that you are a horse-lover too. I am a 60-year old one-horse woman whose horse died at the age of 37½ after having been with me for 20½ very blessed years. I miss him terribly every day and always will. - Owl [This message has been edited by OwlSA (11-21-2005 09:36 PM).] |
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fmlbarebackrider2001 Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 138West Texas, United States |
Owl, I am very sorry to hear that. I know these feelings all to well. My best roping horse of 14 years died last winters. It got just too cold the old boy to handle any more. I have more horses now but there will never be another horse like he was. I grew up loving horses and they have always had a part of my poetry, along with nature. God Bless, Cory Know yourself before you try to know someone else. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm looking forward to your next poem! Welcome to Passions!! "There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Welcome to passions cory |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
GREAT POEM ....really liked it ' ~wolfie howlllls |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Nicely done. Very refreshing. Welcome to the group. Bob |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Cory, welcome to Passions and may you have many more rides ahead of you, as well as that tall man you speak of. |
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