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Angelheart
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0 posted 2005-11-16 11:04 PM



    

The genie looks goofy
The genie looks neat
The genie yet has no feet

The genie looks like a ghost
which makes things weird
I always wonder
if something like this would disappear

But he seems to be relaxing here
with relief
making weird faces
breathing in disbelief

The genie grants wishes
in the his golden glass
they all come true
you can now make them at last

Just make sure they are good
not misunderstood
or things weird
can occur
your mind can be a blur

Becareful
WATCH OUT!
this genie is out


Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

© Copyright 2005 Laura - All Rights Reserved
Sharksbean
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jax
1 posted 2005-11-16 11:11 PM


lol this is cute thanks for sharing i love you

-may the force be with you in poetry

sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
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2 posted 2005-11-17 01:09 PM


This is so cute. It made me laugh. Especially at the end.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-11-17 01:38 PM


May the genie in your bottle be a good one! ~ and grant you all of your wishes!


EA

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4 posted 2005-11-18 07:20 PM




(giggles) ...and remember, ixnay on the wishing for more wishes! (giggles) Yay, this is soooooooo cute, sweet friend, your poetry is enjoyable as always, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Laura, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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