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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2005-11-15 08:19 AM

First Apprehensive Breath

Entering is a fearless thrust of pure intuition
When the heart grows faint in its maniacal drum
Swallowing the dunes is by far less difficult than speech
Although, the senses sharpen in their own telling of truth

It is you that brings the sea rise up inside of me
Echoed in its quiet, immeasurable and everlasting
Though I have grieved my own wondrous fear
Causing me to step around the fullness of my desire

Just a front of cool breeze masks the course of fire
It is you that moves the wake of my soul
The song that sings within my body, within my mind
As I gasp away the vulnerable beads that sheen my skin

Oh, but the dreams that you bestow have haunted me
Leaving nude a picture in perception only I caress
Drawn deep into my lungs, hope and ache made perfect
Mixing bubbling sea and liquid fire, blood flow these depths

For I see more in the passion of half lit eyes
Clarity is tangible when I enter your wild rooms
The smell of your neck calls my mind to disrobe
To hold within itself this passions pound in waves

While every season brings to bloom another morn
Another starlit charm rapt in black velvet midnight
The terror coming in repeals and swells in Braille
And my response is unrehearsed each time

Copyright Kkh 11/15/05

Courage2Survive
Junior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 32

1 posted 2005-11-15 08:24 AM

ThisDiamond,

This poem is breathtaking and enchanting, a lovely penning and very sentimental. I enjoyed reading it and parts of it touched me harder than others and some of the words sparked gentle memories. Thank You for sharing this piece.

C2S

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         .·:* Love and
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            *«        Kellie Cantrell

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-11-15 06:20 PM

Kathleen~

'While every season brings to bloom another morn
Another starlit charm rapt in black velvet midnight
The terror coming in repeals and swells in Braille
And my response is unrehearsed each time'

As always ... you step delicately through a word-hoop of beauty~
Enjoyed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2005-11-15 06:36 PM

Kathy,  passion and so much more flows
heartily within this piece...Each swell
brings to mind a crest that can only be
sensed so easily by yourself.   Very
nicely done,  yes....yes it is!

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

4 posted 2005-11-15 06:54 PM

Absolutely Wonderful!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-11-15 07:26 PM

TD

I am not surprised by the beauty of this, for every poem you write is beautiful!!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2005-11-16 11:24 AM

everything that you write is so very beautiful and this is no exception! Lovely scribe!

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