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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2005-11-15 07:06 AM

TWENTY OR LESS…#220

Copyright 2005 by: Mark V Sheldon

the sane
interfere

we laugh

but in time
we will need

their changes

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

Courage2Survive
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since 2005-11-15

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1 posted 2005-11-15 07:18 AM

Mark,

A truly thought provoking piece. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good poetry.

-x0x0- C2S

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            *«        Kellie Cantrell

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

2 posted 2005-11-15 12:55 PM

Sane...
or
insane...??
I wonder..
Sometimes there is just a thin line between the two.

This evokes Shakespeare's clown..who says so much sane things in an insane appearance.

thank you

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2005-11-15 03:36 PM

or maybe...we don't

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-11-15 06:02 PM

Excellent thought provoking write Mark.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2005-11-15 07:51 PM

You do have a way of pulling at the mind
and bringing out the thought of...IWIHWT!

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

6 posted 2005-11-16 12:18 PM

Courage2Survive:  Glad you enjoyed, and thank you for the kind words.  To provoke thoughts is a very conscious goal of mine...

My Melody...  indeed it is as is the line between courage and stupidity.  Ever notice how behind all humor is the seed of truth...?

HeLen:  I guess it depends on who "they" are, doesn't it?

Nancy:  My pleasure to provoke your thoughts...

Barry -- that's a rather high compliment coming from a poet of your caliber... I thank you, but really, I should be invoking that acronym regarding your picturesque poetry...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

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