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Hockeychick19
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since 2002-10-29
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Massachusetts, USA

0 posted 2005-07-14 09:42 PM


In this world of mine,
Chaos erupts,
People think I can be tough,
But the question is,
Is being tough enough?

I can’t always be tough and hide the pain,
I swim within my tears of rain,
Someone please save me,
And call out my name.

Will this pain ever cease to exist?
My mind runs through all the thoughts in my head,
And I often think to myself,
I wish they were dead,
Dead and buried deep within my soul.

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

© Copyright 2005 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
Tndeer1
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since 2005-06-24
Posts 87
TN. USA
1 posted 2005-07-15 01:03 AM


Very deep and meaningful. Not everyone can express themself in such detail. I like this one.
God Bless!

Tndeer1

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