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Oh, Naked Moon
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Oh, Naked Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Oh, Naked Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Oh you naked moon hold tight to the swoon dancing in barefooted sway On your way to planet Jupiter one-gazillion light years away Toss the gloss of light at bay clearly circling the Milky Way Round the world,phasing swoon shameful hussy of naked moon Have you no modesty at all falling upon this night devoid of X-ratings Oh, naked moon~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis....the moon has been gorgeous...lit my room like day, last night. Your poem is a wonder, just like she is!  |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
First the Dawn, now the Moon.  What can I say....except...WONDERFUL!!! CG |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I like the way you did this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh Marge!!! How on earth did you do this??!!!! WOW!!! How beautiful this is. A keeper for my library for sure. Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Devoid of X-ratings? NOT!! Grinning.... You never fail to write about that shining orb, do ya... Don't stop, okay? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Moon Maiden, I never fail to swoon at your moon pennings ~ and pictorals.  Love & Moon Magic, EO  |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
This is great. |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Dearest Marge, How in the world did you do that sparkly thing? It's gorgeous! Loved your poem!!!! You should have seen the moon tonight where I live. The weather is cool and the nights so clear (for a change...no smog in L.A.). Lol! Just below and to the right could be seen Mars. 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Oh my...that was very sensual...beautiful as always Madame Marge!! Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
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Verbena Member
since 2005-10-17
Posts 196Australia |
Dear Marge It never ceases to amaze me how you 'present' your poetry the way you do! Another 'dazzling' moon in verse! Wonderful! Love Verbena xo |
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Yogi Member
since 2001-11-05
Posts 68 |
Really Enjoyed Thanx |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Soooooooo lovely And it is truly a breath-taking moon you penned here. Thank you |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful, I loved it! And you always put on such a great presentation as well.  ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Marge Tindal, I enjoyed your visual poem. I particularly loved the roundness of the moon that you created in the form of your stanza. - Owl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you ALL so very much~ I spent half the night 'talking' to that gorgeous orb of light~ If you thought she was bright last night .. wait .. you ain't seen nuthin' yet ! As one would well imagine ... I'm a moonie-holic~  She 'speaks' ... I have no choice but to pen her~ Glad you liked my little sprinkle-of-twinkles too~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
A magnificent piece! The form, the poem, the sparkles, the thought are all so extremely well done. Rae |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, Rae~ I hope you got a glimpse of her beauty last night~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
It just amazes me the way you do these, Marge! ....jo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, Jo~ I'm just a moon-aholic at heart~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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