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When the Halo Dims
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When the Halo Dims |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
As the sun, the human halo keeps its role — Not to burn, or turn a passion blind — But to guide the body and the soul Safely through the shadows of the mind. And as a night bids all but Love to sleep, There in the cloistered thrall of passion's clasp... A Man and a Woman united sweep The universe in unifying grasp. When love is real and pure, in its embrace The halo dims, reverent of Love’s true Grace, thus lending Love its radiant face — So what is human halo’s glowing hue? But truth and beauty born of cosmic love, A symbol of the burning stars above. CG |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The halo dims, reverent of Love’s true Grace, thus lending Love its radiant face — So what is human halo’s glowing hue? But truth and beauty born of cosmic love, A symbol of the burning stars above." Beautiful...perfectly beautiful. Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CG~ How inspiringly lovely is this~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nicely done CG...you have put all of the needed parts in the poetic stew... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The glow from your cosmic halo puts even the stars to shame... EA |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Good point! Enjoyed. |
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PoetessFlamme Junior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 20France |
Bonjour!!! Sir Castleguard, Beauty is to be found within your words, The night sky is filled with love, halos of the heavens~ as well as your heart! |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Enchantress - Thank you for the kind words. Marge - Glad to be so, thank you. Magnus - Thank you, yet all the needed parts were collected from the pennings of wisdom from the many great poets here, for they are the inspiration. EA - It is your words that light up the sky, and the hearts that open up to the majesty of the Cosmos. I respectfully insist, that you must have mistaken the glow of your own (halo)...for mine.  But thank you.PoetessFlamme - Thank you for finding beauty within my words, for my words speak from my heart. Though 'tis true, that many hearts, as the stars, hold a hidden beauty waiting to be discovered. CG |
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