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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-07-14 08:23 PM



And when a deer calls
Under mountains’ shadows
How will you answer

The air is cool
At dusk in Autumn—
My rooms at home
Are lit and warm


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-07-14 09:28 PM


Huan Yi
A beautiful invitation.

iliana
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2 posted 2005-07-14 10:08 PM


Very nice!
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-07-15 03:36 AM


I like it
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-07-15 11:53 PM


Enjoyed...James
she'll_be_apples
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5 posted 2005-07-16 05:36 AM


Warm and inviting, enjoyed
Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-04-27 01:25 PM


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