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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2005-11-13 11:28 AM

~Oh, how the daybreak inspires~

e·jac·u·late
v. e·jac·u·lat·ed, e·jac·u·lat·ing, e·jac·u·lates

1.To eject or discharge abruptly.
2.To utter suddenly and passionately, exclaim

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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-11-13 11:55 AM

beautiful picture, with beautiful thoughts

much enjoyed Marge

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-11-13 11:55 AM

I never quite thought of it that way Marge.
But, yes indeed..it is a splendid way to describe it.

Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2005-11-13 04:12 PM

When the sun came
Venus blushed a special hue
And glowed with such a stunning light
As caused the stars to envy her

yv
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

4 posted 2005-11-13 04:47 PM

Wow...that image is absolutely incredible!! I love the use of language in this poem...simple...yet so meaningful! Lovely...Madame Marge...simply lovely!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-11-13 05:22 PM

Marge?

You can imagine my surprise...
and then my delight
at the dawning of your thoughts...

Excellent job!

Betty
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

6 posted 2005-11-13 06:10 PM

Beautiful Marge. I love the water so much & sure do miss it living here in the middle of the country.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

7 posted 2005-11-13 07:19 PM

LOL, enjoyed the word playfulness
and that picture...is stunning!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2005-11-13 08:04 PM

All I can do is say Ditto....every comment
fits perfectly.

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2005-11-13 08:04 PM

This is such a beautiful view, Marge. Thank you for sharing it.

Verbena
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since 2005-10-17

Posts 196
Australia

10 posted 2005-11-14 06:34 AM

Dear Marge

Such a glorious dawn! Your poem and picture are just lovely!

Love Verbena xo

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2005-11-14 09:22 AM

Oh, my! 'Tis a tad bit tamer ~ and lovlier! ~ than I was expecting!

P.S. That "halo" of mine has a habit of slipping every now and then!

Hugs from a very earthy one!
EO

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

12 posted 2005-11-14 06:10 PM

Curiosity brought me here...glad it did.

Wonderful poem and picture.

CG

(P.S. O/T EA - the 'halo' does not slip...only 'dims' occasionally...LOL)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2005-12-06 11:38 AM

Thanks to each of you for whatever reason you came in to read this one~

Personally, it just might become one of my favorite portraitures of the onset of dawn~

*Huglets*hugs:
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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