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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Fragile Precious these moments In clock’s tick of time’s passage 'I love you' fills hearts Last moments appear too soon Surprise comes with too much haste "There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...yes, very precious those moments, and sometimes time takes them before we're ready. I feel you here!  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very wise words Karilea. hugs sweet lady, Chrislane Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
I understand, and I suppose this is why we are blessed with memories. Great write! Kristabell |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, both life and time are fragile ~ and they pass so quickly. A poignant tanka you have penned, Karilea. Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Just came back to give you another hug, sissie.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Time ~ flys by in the blink of an eye. Thank God for precious memories. Hugging you tight~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Just lovely ... It reminds me of the song fragile for Iglesias Thank you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Have you been reading my mind again? I know the feel of this too well...good evening SunOne... |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
to hold the hands of time! You captured the moment in this write! well said! thanks for the read it was enjoyable. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Everything is fleeting and therefore valuable in its own right. Well said Sunshine! I enjoyed the read. ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
....sigh.....thinking.....so read my mind, ok? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Fragility reigns A life spirit has passed on Can't prevent sorrow Well said, Karilea! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Those precious moments are ones to cherish. Beautiful, Karilea. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~fragile~ K, sending hugs and a whispered 'I am so sorry' warmed by the glow of a soft candlelight and peaceful thoughts.... |
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