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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-11-12 11:00 PM

Fragile

Precious these moments
In clock’s tick of time’s passage
'I love you' fills hearts

Last moments appear too soon
Surprise comes with too much haste

"There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2005-11-12 11:09 PM

Sissie...yes, very precious those moments, and sometimes time takes them before we're ready. I feel you here!

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-11-12 11:17 PM

Very wise words Karilea.
hugs sweet lady, Chrislane

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2005-11-14 11:36 PM

Enjoyed...James

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

4 posted 2005-11-14 11:46 PM

I understand, and I suppose this is why we are blessed with memories. Great write!

Kristabell

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2005-11-14 11:58 PM

Yes, both life and time are fragile ~ and they pass so quickly.

A poignant tanka you have penned, Karilea.

Love & Sun Light,
Linda

Martie

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California

6 posted 2005-11-15 12:19 PM

Just came back to give you another hug, sissie....

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2005-11-15 12:47 PM

Time ~ flys by in the blink of an eye.
Thank God for precious memories.
Hugging you tight~

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

8 posted 2005-11-15 12:52 PM

Just lovely ...

It reminds me of the song fragile for Iglesias

Thank you

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2005-11-15 08:00 PM

Have you been reading my mind again? I know
the feel of this too well...good evening
SunOne...

pictureme2
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since 2005-11-13

Posts 194

10 posted 2005-11-15 10:21 PM

to hold the hands of time! You captured the moment in this write! well said! thanks for the read it was enjoyable.

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

11 posted 2005-11-15 10:23 PM

Everything is fleeting and therefore valuable in its own right. Well said Sunshine! I enjoyed the read.

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of time like dew on the tip of a leaf.
~Rabindranath Tagore

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

12 posted 2005-11-21 09:31 AM

....sigh.....thinking.....so read my mind, ok?

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kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

13 posted 2005-11-22 08:03 PM

Fragility reigns
A life spirit has passed on
Can't prevent sorrow

Well said, Karilea! KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

14 posted 2005-11-22 10:09 PM

Those precious moments are ones to cherish. Beautiful, Karilea.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

15 posted 2005-11-22 10:15 PM

~fragile~ K, sending hugs
and a whispered 'I am so sorry'
warmed by the glow of a soft candlelight
and peaceful thoughts....

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