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Sunshine
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0 posted 2005-11-12 11:00 PM



Fragile

Precious these moments
In clock’s tick of time’s passage
'I love you' fills hearts

Last moments appear too soon
Surprise comes with too much haste


"There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron

© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-11-12 11:09 PM


Sissie...yes, very precious those moments, and sometimes time takes them before we're ready.  I feel you here!  
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2 posted 2005-11-12 11:17 PM


Very wise words Karilea.
hugs sweet lady, Chrislane

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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3 posted 2005-11-14 11:36 PM


Enjoyed...James
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4 posted 2005-11-14 11:46 PM


I understand, and I suppose this is why we are blessed with memories. Great write!

Kristabell

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5 posted 2005-11-14 11:58 PM


Yes, both life and time are fragile ~ and they pass so quickly.

A poignant tanka you have penned, Karilea.

Love & Sun Light,
Linda

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6 posted 2005-11-15 12:19 PM


Just came back to give you another hug, sissie....
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7 posted 2005-11-15 12:47 PM


Time ~ flys by in the blink of an eye.
Thank God for precious memories.
Hugging you tight~

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8 posted 2005-11-15 12:52 PM



Just lovely ...

It reminds me of the song fragile for Iglesias


Thank you

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9 posted 2005-11-15 08:00 PM


Have you been reading my mind again?  I know
the feel of this too well...good evening
SunOne...

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10 posted 2005-11-15 10:21 PM


to hold the hands of time! You captured the moment in this write! well said! thanks for the read it was enjoyable.

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11 posted 2005-11-15 10:23 PM


Everything is fleeting and therefore valuable in its own right.  Well said Sunshine! I enjoyed the read.

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of time like dew on the tip of a leaf.
~Rabindranath Tagore


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12 posted 2005-11-21 09:31 AM


....sigh.....thinking.....so read my mind, ok?

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13 posted 2005-11-22 08:03 PM


Fragility reigns
A life spirit has passed on
Can't prevent sorrow

Well said, Karilea!  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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14 posted 2005-11-22 10:09 PM


Those precious moments are ones to cherish. Beautiful, Karilea.
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15 posted 2005-11-22 10:15 PM


~fragile~ K, sending hugs
and a whispered 'I am so sorry'
warmed by the glow of a soft candlelight
and peaceful thoughts....

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