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RMW
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0 posted 2005-11-12 01:01 PM


Your First Kiss

It should,
as though a prayerful breath
laced with fragrance from a garden,
of itself,
ere lips touch,
feel, caress.
So comes this wish
softly.

RMW

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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2005-11-12 01:05 PM


I suppose we all wish things worked perfectly but by the time you have gone through it, stopped working enough to realise it, you look too frail

To go through with it

Bodger

Dominique-Simone
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2 posted 2005-11-12 01:06 PM


This was beautiful..
Martie
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California
3 posted 2005-11-12 01:20 PM


Bob

This is just how it should be....!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2005-11-12 02:00 PM


...that is how my first kiss should have been...It was far from romantic and highly hysterical!

~ I just realized my lips are puckered up!


EA

blueKilo
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5 posted 2005-11-12 05:30 PM


wow.  
just lovely.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2005-11-12 05:39 PM


lovely words~~for such a kiss~~

M

PoetessFlamme
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7 posted 2005-11-13 03:51 AM


What a lovely kiss!
Huan Yi
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Waukegan
8 posted 2005-11-13 07:53 AM



Full of romance
And not much experience
Their lips sought each other’s
Under summer boughs

Both closed their eyes
Too soon in their innocence
He missed her cheek
She sucked his nose


Sunshine
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9 posted 2005-11-13 08:14 AM



...so comes this wish,
softly...

~*~

Quietly beautiful...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2005-11-13 08:48 AM


Perfectly beautiful...lovely.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

RMW
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11 posted 2005-11-13 04:24 PM


My .... everyone .... thank you. Bob
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