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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-11-12 12:05 PM



Sunset
On the veranda

I watch as you enter
Into my home

You talk of rescue
Return to a world
I left long ago

Pray Dear Sir
As stars appear

What makes you think
I want to be found



© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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1 posted 2005-11-13 08:41 AM


your poetry is incredible
and inspires me to places you don't even know...thank you

Huan Yi
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2 posted 2005-11-13 08:45 AM



Helen,

Please send back reports . . .

And Thanks

John


1slick_lady
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3 posted 2005-11-13 08:46 AM


i am an Alfa Romeo owner and there is a show today i have to go show but i will be back later
Huan Yi
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4 posted 2005-11-13 08:51 AM



I own an 89 Bonneville . . .
It’s smart enough to be leave me alone



MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2005-11-13 11:27 AM


Enjoying your work, John -- much said in not many words and leaves the mind thinking...  Good stuff.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-04-21 01:16 PM


because he knows you better!

beautiful way to put out the question.

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