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Have_You_Ever_Loved_Me
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0 posted 2005-11-12 05:29 AM


You're beautiful when you cry
You wanna watch me die
With every tear that falls from your eye?
It hurts, I know
And now, I have to go
It's time to show
That I can make it on my own
I'm not afraid to be alone

You're pitiful when you try
I know it's hard for you to deny
That you really did lie
It hurts, I know
But I'll be the first to show
That I'll only grow
To you, this goes unknown
But I'm not afraid to be alone

You're amazing when you're there
When you make me feel you care
And I'll admit that I'm scared
It hurts, I see
Things between us will never be
And all I have is me
You're no longer my stone
And I'm afraid to be alone

I'm sad when I feel the hate
But I guess it's only fate
Too bad it couldn't wait
It hurts, I know
And I don't know if I can go
And I don't know if I can show
That I can't make it on my own

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PoetessFlamme
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since 2005-11-12
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1 posted 2005-11-12 06:10 AM


I enjoyed reading your words, and feeling them as well, this could be a beautiful song, sad but very beautiful.

You're amazing when you're there
When you make me feel you care
And I'll admit that I'm scared

They care, hurt is just covering it up...take time to peel back the layers and you can see it there.


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2 posted 2005-11-12 10:19 AM


Welcome to PIP


Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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3 posted 2005-11-14 09:33 AM


Welcome to Passions, I hope you enjoy your time here, please check your email for a special greeting.....


Greeneyes~

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2005-11-14 10:12 AM


Welcome to Pip!!

I really related to this piece and am looking forward to more!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-11-14 11:06 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!


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Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

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