Open Poetry #36 |
My Fear |
Have_You_Ever_Loved_Me New Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 3 |
You're beautiful when you cry You wanna watch me die With every tear that falls from your eye? It hurts, I know And now, I have to go It's time to show That I can make it on my own I'm not afraid to be alone You're pitiful when you try I know it's hard for you to deny That you really did lie It hurts, I know But I'll be the first to show That I'll only grow To you, this goes unknown But I'm not afraid to be alone You're amazing when you're there When you make me feel you care And I'll admit that I'm scared It hurts, I see Things between us will never be And all I have is me You're no longer my stone And I'm afraid to be alone I'm sad when I feel the hate But I guess it's only fate Too bad it couldn't wait It hurts, I know And I don't know if I can go And I don't know if I can show That I can't make it on my own |
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PoetessFlamme Junior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 20France |
I enjoyed reading your words, and feeling them as well, this could be a beautiful song, sad but very beautiful. You're amazing when you're there When you make me feel you care And I'll admit that I'm scared They care, hurt is just covering it up...take time to peel back the layers and you can see it there. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome to PIP Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Welcome to Passions, I hope you enjoy your time here, please check your email for a special greeting..... Greeneyes~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Welcome to Pip!! I really related to this piece and am looking forward to more!! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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