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Silence Spoke In Volumes
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Silence Spoke In Volumes |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Silence Spoke In Volumes I shall have to get over this Although it will take time Since you no longer care For this lonely heart of mine I have been feeling the loss Overwhelmed by distress Yet what I came to realise You have thought of me less Realization hits the hardest Seems you want no more Felt like a stab in the guts The knife twisted to the core I will nurse my aching heart As I shed tears in despair Silence spoke in volumes It is painful becoming aware Hope ©2005 Link to poem with music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/94/poem_793031.html |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
I have been there. You wrote it well. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
The ache goes on but you've turned it into a beat for life. Excellent job. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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fmlbarebackrider2001 Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 138West Texas, United States |
Boy howdy, you got that feeling down pat. Perfect words for a heart shattering moment. Know yourself before you try to know someone else. |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
painful yet I feel your strength! loved the flow of this and sometimes we have to feel pain to really appreciate no pain! Thanks for this read! pictureme2 |
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