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Open Poetry #36

Autumn#1

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2005-11-11 01:25 PM

Drunken yellow leaves
stagger down to join their mates
huddled on the ground.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-11-11 01:30 PM

Absolutely excellent, and the imagery is perfect! Well done Nancy.

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

J. K. Mitchell
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since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

2 posted 2005-11-11 02:02 PM

Oh this is great. I love it.

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

3 posted 2005-11-11 02:03 PM

Perfect. RMW

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2005-11-11 02:56 PM

Thanks so much. I am so pleased you like it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2005-11-12 12:40 PM

I can see them all now! ~ and I feel like jumping into them!

Autumnal hugs,
Linda

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2005-11-12 01:15 AM

I surely do like the way you seeing falling leaves....this made me laugh! And, I like the analogy you've made with "drunk" on summer.

......jo

PoetessFlamme
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since 2005-11-12

Posts 20
France

7 posted 2005-11-12 06:23 AM

What a vision!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2005-11-12 02:57 PM

Nan~

Ya' nailed this one ... right on !!

I adore it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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