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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-11-10 12:13 PM



A cold
Gray
Rainy day

Gulls
In background
As if ready to sail

Alone
A wake
Humming a way

The wind
About Greenland . . .
And hunting the whale


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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2005-11-10 12:24 PM


WOW.....I've just been on the shore of Greenland and hearing the sounds of the ocean.  I am a little puzzled about the title, but I'm guessing Judy is what was in the mind of the one alone.  Enjoyed!   ...jo
Huan Yi
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2 posted 2005-11-10 12:31 PM



iliana,

http://www.judycollins.com/lyrics/Farewell_to_Tarwathie.htm



Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
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3 posted 2005-11-10 01:04 PM


Another beauty John.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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4 posted 2007-04-21 01:53 PM


hers is very passionate.
yours must be sung by a seagull.


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